Wednesday, November 10, 2010


I like lights that go
on, off, on, off, on, off.

I saw a light go
on, off, on, off, on, off

I had a seizure.
oh, no, oh, no, oh, no.


  1. When I read your work... Can I call it work? It seems sort of offensive to Works, in the nobler senese. I digress.

    When I read your words strung together in a faint semblance flirting with coherent thought, I actually smiled, because lights going on and off evoked the sound of a thumping baseline and good things like that, and I decided you were writing about a rave. Raves are a positive things.

    However, I don't know if you are a minor or not, or are showing this to minors, so I have to adjust the grade. C+/-

  2. That's right. A positive things. It is not a grammatical error when you did it on purpose. Put THAT in your pipe and SMOKE IT.

    Also kids, smoking is bad. Unless done in a pipe. A+ to me for the socially conscious message.