Wednesday, November 3, 2010

Haiku #6

Why do you smell good?
Is it because you shower?
Oh, that's someone else.


  1. Your poem has offended me greatly. So much so that I must continue to respond to your poems with poems of my own.

    Your poem is lame,
    Yet it makes me want to dance.
    Oh look! I can dance.

  2. Offence is never intended, however, I admire your dance-ability.

    dance star, dance away
    you dance like a little girl
    desperate to go pee.

  3. Dancing queen, young and
    Sweet, only seventeen. Dan-
    cing queen, young and sweet.