I woke up this morning, wondering how to win
Shall I play the drums, and get good at them, Jim?
"No you should not. That's a stupid thing to do,
You suck at rhythm, and you'll turn us all blue."
'Okay, I said to him, while shutting the door hinge,
I'll go right ahead, and peel this ripe orange'
See that? I rhymed with orange!
I've instituted a new policy. I will guide you through where you have (so thoroughly) failed in this poem.
ReplyDeleteL1 - 13 syllables / 11 syllables. No match. No rhyme. FAIL (F-)
L2 - 11 syllables / 11 syllables. Yes match. Yes rhyme. PASS (D)
L3 - 12 syllables / 11 syllables. No match. Sort of rhymes. Not Pass (F+)
Did it make sense? No -> Fail (F)
Did it have bears? No -> Fail (F--)
Aggregate: F-