Tuesday, December 20, 2011

Double Haiku

If you want to listen to my trumpet
Stand up and blow in it- because that is how you make sound
Dang. People are running and dying now.
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  1. El OsoJanuary 26, 2012 at 2:07 PM

    It's actually only one haiku. You just didn't count your syllables right.

    F-

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  2. El OsoJanuary 26, 2012 at 2:09 PM

    Here's actually how a double haiku would work:

    Wafflecheese you suck
    You do not know how to poem
    They make me so sick

    Sometimes do I think
    That the world has gone to pot
    because you maim poems

    You're welcome.

    A+ (to me)

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  3. AnonymousJune 20, 2013 at 10:03 PM

    His rhyme scheme went
    10/14/10
    A regular Haiku would be
    5/7/5
    Maybe he thought a double Haiku meant to double the syllables in each sentence... El Oso, you shouldn't be so harsh.

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